>>4162187I'm no author, so I can't really talk, but your writing comes off as pretty stilted in parts, no offence. For example:
>One episode I remember was when I was talking to one black kid my age, a stone's throw from a large group of black kids. I'm not sure how it came up, but I remember telling him, "White people have a culture," but more likely "White people aren't uncultured," to which he responded "Those guys are gonna beat you up if they hear that.""One episode I remember was" sounds incredibly unnatural and is borderline grammatically incorrect, and the "but more likely" doesn't really make sense because you didn't make it clear that the sentence "White people have a culture" was a paraphrase and not a direct quotation. Also the Timmy-out about some little nigga making jokes about sex slavery in your social studies class is pretty redundant considering most 15 year olds who aren't autists with sticks up their ass make jokes about controversial and edgy topics regardless of race.
>which I had learned was a derogatory African-American slang for an attractive white woman, often associated with the "BNWO" alternate reality fetish (Google "BNWO" at your own risk)Ok you baited me
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